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Dead
Contributed by
Smiley_18
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Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:28:29 AM in AEST
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I took a knife to my wrist today.
I saw the blood but couldn't feel the pain.
She called me stupid again.
I heared her but i was numb to her words.
I saw you with another person yesterday.
I felt pain then.
But yet I couldn't seem to cry.
She died sunday.
I didn't cry at her funeral.
I should have, but I was to relieved.
I shot myself tonight.
Now I feel your pain.
I killed myself to stop the hurting.
But now all I feel is the hurt inside your heart.
Now who's going to look after you.
To keep you safe?
Now that i'm dead.
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Smiley_18
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Re: Dead
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by midian on
Friday, 18th August 2006 @ 05:43:25 AM AEST
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nice poem.
Sometimes its hard to find courage when we need it most! but "self harm" is never the answer all it does is give you a reminder of the reason forall your pain... like a little post it note attached to your body in the form of a scar,
"She called me stupid again.
I heared her but i was numb to her words.
I saw you with another person yesterday.
I felt pain then.
But yet I couldn't seem to cry"
i particulally thought this put accross a deep emotion which i liked
~Before the gates, of Heaven and Hell~ |
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Re: Dead
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by THEFORGOTTENSOUL on
Wednesday, 17th December 2008 @ 05:46:24 PM AEST
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i really like this poem it brings back memories
i feel it
it made me want to cry
job well done |
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Re: Dead
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by Aaron8124 on
Thursday, 22nd January 2009 @ 07:19:34 PM AEST
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| i know how these feelings go... very sad, very well written |
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