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In my dreams
Contributed by
holderofthestone
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Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 12:18:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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to you my love
I bid good night
Im longing still
to hold tight
ill miss you dear
and i may weep
and think of you
until i sleep
but worry not
please do not fret
these tears shouldn't
cause you regrets
for im not sad
though it may seem
because ill hold you
in my dreams...
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Re: In my dreams
(User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 07:37:50 PM AEST
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thanks for the comment =)
this poem was well written, and i can feel the emotions underneath the words...
i especially liked the ending.. very powerful
"for im not sad
though it may seem
because ill hold you
in my dreams..." |
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Re: In my dreams
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:18:03 AM AEST
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Excellent
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Re: In my dreams
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by ellimac on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 02:19:58 AM AEST
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| great piece. i wish what i was going through seemed this easy.. |
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