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Look to me
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 02:46:17 AM in AEST
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when brightness from the sun has gone,
And all the world is grey,
When doubt creeps up into your mind,
Look to me to show the way,
When dreams turn into nightmares,
And life is full of decay,
When nothing seems to go right,
Look to me to save the day,
When friendships break and lovers leave,
And you are lonesome and blue,
When you can't face this world at all,
Look to me to get you through,
When you feel good and happy again,
And life has no battles to run,
When life is bright as sunshines rays,
Don't look to me,for you have won.
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Re: Look to me
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by shelby on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 01:17:41 PM AEST
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This is so beautiful Sue. Left me with a warm feeling .
Michelle |
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Re: Look to me
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 12:10:57 AM AEST
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yes yes
good poem good flow |
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Re: Look to me
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by PHISHBATES on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 09:47:04 AM AEST
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| This was nice. I’ll have to read more of your work. My world is can be black, you added a little light. |
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Re: Look to me
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by candysears on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 10:50:55 AM AEST
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Great poem...Simple wonderful....
Great flow..
God Bless!
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