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For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
Contributed by
drtylilsecret
on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 03:45:51 AM in AEST
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Watch the sea turn bloody red,
An infant dying in his bed
His time has come,
But what if not,
What if we're all meant to
Just live
And rot
In our graves
So pour your seventh glass of whiskey
Just to stop asking why....
Get out another bottle,
To stop from screaming out,
So then your body hits the hardwood floor....
and you finally agree
That's how life..was meant..to be..
You can bang your head
Against all four walls
But all youll make is a tiny dent
Youll stay the same,
So will all else,
Youll lose this game
Your answers false
Dont search for meanings
Dont waste your breath
Give up on feelings
And wait for death.
To come knocking on your door
A young girl walks alone,
Cause there's no one waiting for her home,
And so she sits and cries at nights,
But no one hears,
Only a pillow to dry her tears..
So with a bridge
And with one fall
She puts an end..
To it all...
Dont roll your eyes,
Dont shake your head,
What this girl saw,
you have yet to see
That this cruel end
Was her destiny
Dont ask questions,
Youll get no answer
This life is spreading
Like a cancer
And i still..can't find..the cure
Theres no such thing
As way too late,
If things end bloody
It was your fate
Youve no control
Youre just a pawn
So with one move,
And poof
Youre gone
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drtylilsecret
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2006-08-19 03:45:51]
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by PHISHBATES on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 10:09:04 AM AEST
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| I enjoyed reading your work. I think it was good. thanks |
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 11:28:25 AM AEST
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You did great on this write
well done |
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by Cancer on
Saturday, 19th August 2006 @ 01:52:02 PM AEST
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*****, i loved this. i can't say there was a part that i didn't agree with.
Your answer’s false
Don’t search for meanings
Don’t waste your breath
Give up on feelings
And wait for death.
that was genius.
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 03:15:11 AM AEST
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| Brilliant poem, its so sad because its all true to. xxx |
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by judo on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 01:16:00 PM AEST
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Great writting.
brilliant |
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by Anesthetic on
Monday, 13th November 2006 @ 04:29:26 PM AEST
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*mouth hangs open*
you are amazingly talented and i have to say i find my self agree completly with every thing you write. thank you for sharing.
~Ebony~ |
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Re: For When Reality Gives You the Death Glare...
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by tearstained_soul on
Thursday, 16th November 2006 @ 02:09:02 AM AEST
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| damn homey, you pretty much hit the bullseye. your insight is PERFECT and what you wrote is TRUE AND A HALF..... too bad some people cant acnollege that, they're too damn scred of admitting that they have little to no control over there destiny. :) good write hun; 5 STARS! |
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