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The Outsider
Contributed by
secretwind
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Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 01:30:04 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Off balance and going under
and slowly
fading away,
I'm trying to think of something
I had to say.
Silently confused
don't know what I'm thinking of
after I fall
why do I still get up.
I'm often laughing
at nothing
and suddenly I'll start frowning
feeling sensations of hate,
I'm just a shadow on the wall
a twisted soul
that nobody is waiting for...
hear my footsteps echo down the hall
as I leave
no reason to stay anymore.
I stop and I pause
at the crossroads of fate...
I sit and evaluate
how did I get in this state.
can anyone help me out
with what I am trying to say?
hmm
didn't think so
so I'll continue to fade away.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2006-08-20 01:30:04]
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Re: The Outsider
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by emystar on
Sunday, 20th August 2006 @ 08:32:20 PM AEST
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Good writing, my friend.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: The Outsider
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 09:03:20 AM AEST
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| Dont fade away, your poems are to good keep writing.. xxxx |
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Re: The Outsider
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by kismetkills on
Sunday, 1st February 2009 @ 09:25:44 PM AEST
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| cool poem, thanks for sharing it. |
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