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Heaven Sent...
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 05:21:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Oh baby of mine, what did I do,
before the lord gave me you,
my little bundle of perfection,
who looks to me for protection,
my whole world revolves round you,
I watch in awe at all you do,
your first tooth, your first smile,
it will last such a short while,
one day this moment will be past,
if only I could make it last,
pure innocence, shines from your eyes,
so sad the world will make you wise,
your little fingers curl around mine,
you smile at me, all the time,
I blow a raspberry on your tummy,
you laugh with glee, at your mummy,
I love the smell of your beautiful skin
baby powder and Lanolin,
Your become the child then the man,
I must enjoy you while I can,
Copyright ©
lillyjane
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2006-08-21 05:21:13]
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Re: Heaven Sent...
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by Spike on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 08:06:32 AM AEST
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Aww, sweet and maternal, reminds me so much of the pleasures of my kids as babies. I only realised how precious the moments were when they grew out of them. Very nicely composed.
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Re: Heaven Sent...
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by Manda2 on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 05:12:24 PM AEST
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| Beautiful. Although my girls aren't babies anymore, their little faces still look the same and they'll always be my babies! I loved this poem Lilyjane, it reminded me of all the baby smells and precious moments. The smell of baby powder and lanolin has now been replaced by nail varnish, chanel no5 and charlie! |
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Re: Heaven Sent...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 07:15:40 PM AEST
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A very sweet and loving reminder of the wonder
and joy a baby brings. Beautifully said, lillyjane.
you are right .. they are not babies for long ..
~Breezy |
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Re: Heaven Sent...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:56:59 AM AEST
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This was so tender, intimately pure and full of devotion for your child. I have a line in one of my poems called "C The Message" that I was reminded of by your intro to this wonderful and beautifully written piece of "precious":
"cruel caregivers calling children crying crybabies"
Not Lillyjane! She knows better.
wabl
KenMoore
cowboy
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Re: Heaven Sent...
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by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 03:35:38 AM AEST
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This is a great reminder of how they are when they are a bundle of joy. Please cherish them as long as you can. Lilly Jane you write with such love and compassion which shows the beauty within your soul.
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Re: Heaven Sent...
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by emystar on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 03:03:30 AM AEST
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Very beautifull, tender and touching.
Smiles, huggs,
emy |
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