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Childbirth
Contributed by
twbanter
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Monday, 21st August 2006 @ 05:24:53 PM in AEST
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A storm has come, violent, painful, unrelenting
In its wake
Beautiful sunshine
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Re: Childbirth
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by JockPhillips on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 02:44:42 AM AEST
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| Yeah and it's good. Probably one of the best poems I've seen on here. And I like it and I'm being genuine and serious too and anyone can challenge it but they can look at my work and they can see Winter and they can know that I'm being serious. Because sometimes in three lines of good you can say more than you can say in more lines than that in bad. Keep up the strong work for. |
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