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die
Contributed by
crazy
on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 11:49:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Lonesomly I walk
in a state of dispare
for the ones around me
don't really care.
they see only air
not a body or even a soul
no hope for happieness
among the untold
of days yet to come
Fearful of these surroundings
unable to breath
looking inside me
for who I am and wish to be
you see my delema
and don't understand why
that i can't wait
till the day I
die!
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crazy
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2006-08-22 11:49:00]
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Re: die
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by LifeFadingAway on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 12:50:44 PM AEST
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I used to feel the same way at school, but now I go to a really small school with only 40 people and everyone knows eachother there
Good poem |
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Re: die
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by drtylilsecret on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:28:15 PM AEST
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..........and this is why i'm dreading the start of school. that's exactly what's gonna happen.....but great write.
--talli |
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Re: die
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by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 02:05:37 AM AEST
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| You've really captured the feelings that countless other young adults are feeling or have felt during their school experience. Just realize that for every jock a-hole, cheerleader skank, there are two of you, feeling isolated and scared, just hoping for someone to share themselves with. Good write. |
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