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Last Thought
Contributed by
Jen54
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Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 01:16:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I dont know how much longer I can last
I'm fighting an unseen battle with life
You pass me without a second glance
While I wonder if Ill ever see you again
The tides are turning
And death has got the upper hand over me
So when the day comes
When I am here no more
Just remember that you were the last thought going threw my mind
Copyright ©
Jen54
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2006-08-22 13:16:36]
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Re: Last Thought
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by Munchkin on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 04:23:57 PM AEST
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| you seem like you would appreciate the phrase "to tell the truth, if you stabbed me in the back, with my dying breath I'd apologize for bleeding on your shirt". At least i think that's how it goes. |
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Re: Last Thought
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by Lionel on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:39:43 PM AEST
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| Good poem, Jen.... I didn't know you cared. Ha. Seriously, If you want to be remembered - talk to the guy. |
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