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I am Woman
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jerseysue
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Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 05:10:20 PM in AEST
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I am woman, so do not scorn me,
For I am strong I better warn you,
I don't melt like winter snow,
I want respect, from you, and so
I am woman, I can be sweet,
If you sweep me off my feet,
I will be what you expect,
I will love you forever, and yet
I am woman, you will be my lover,
But if you cheat, and find another,
I will be hurt, you will lose my trust,
I don't know if I could forgive you, but,
I am woman, I have a big heart,
I would be lost, if we had to part,
I would be sad, may even cry,
I want you back, I need you, but why,
I am woman, I have feelings,
You make me alive, you send me reeling,
You are my life, I cannot lie,
I am woman, thats the reason why
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Re: I am Woman
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 05:46:18 PM AEST
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Honest and heartfelt write, sue.. a woman to the core!
Much truth in these words .. a strength but also a
vulnerability of sorts. Very definitely WOMAN!!
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Re: I am Woman
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by trini on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 06:04:37 PM AEST
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aww. this was great. you reminded me why i like this site so much
keep on posting
great work by the way :)
-Trini |
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Re: I am Woman
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by Man_On_High on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:11:56 PM AEST
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admirable strength and utter conviction Sue..
the traits of a woman
Wonderful post luv-
B |
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Re: I am Woman
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 08:34:52 PM AEST
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Strong as an ox
Sly as a fox
Oh Woman shoud rule the world.
Who thinks they don't?!!!
The hand that rocks the cradle ...
Nice intimate write, wonderful read.
More info for that poem o' mine.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: I am Woman
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 09:19:19 PM AEST
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You go girl! I can feel your power within your words! Great job. Flowed perfectly liked the style also it stood strong.
Michelle |
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Re: I am Woman
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 22nd August 2006 @ 10:15:08 PM AEST
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I love flows from the heart
well done |
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Re: I am Woman
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by poet_in_waiting on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 02:19:15 PM AEST
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very nice Sue ... i have been working on the rhyme stuff .. it is not as easy as it seems .. you do it well .. i'm just glad you didn't say hear me roar !!
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Re: I am Woman
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by lillyjane on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 03:47:31 PM AEST
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| You speak for all us women there Sue.. Thanks lol.. Brilliant xxx |
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