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Simplistic
Contributed by
midnight_writer
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Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 08:54:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Staring at the wall
Like nothing matters at all
Simply dreaming
But I feel like screaming...
I think I've fallen in love
And I ask Him from above
Please God, don't let me fall too hard
For I've already let down some of my guard
I don't want to let anybody in
Where few have been
To see the inside of me
A scary place to be...
What a disaster
Oh well, let's go faster
Pieces put back together
Now I can battle the weather
Broken masterpiece
What a beautiful release
Please understand
None of this was planned
This has no meaning
Someone should be intervening
I only rhyme
Just to pass the time
I can only write
Because I don't sleep at night
The darkness sparks inspiration
Including this creation...
Staring at the wall
Like nothing matters at all
Simply dreaming
But I feel like screaming...
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2006-08-23 20:54:01]
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Re: Simplistic
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 09:18:04 PM AEST
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| This is a very good write...goo,happy and sad all in one! I love it! Shari :) |
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Re: Simplistic
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by shelby on
Wednesday, 23rd August 2006 @ 11:01:49 PM AEST
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You rode the waves of emotions here I liked that.
Michelle |
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Re: Simplistic
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by candysears on
Thursday, 24th August 2006 @ 08:36:00 AM AEST
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I could feel the emotion all through this piece
A excellent piece of work...Really like your poem..
God Bless!
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