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caress
Contributed by
Merkaba
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 12:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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caress
moving behind you
the water flows so freely
cleansing
could we be so pure
bliss
more would be too much
this taste ever so divine
we shed our minds with one another
how spectacular this would be
to forget the world hand in hand
lost in you
but alone i walk this tightrope
tears revealing loss
sobbing with my removal of dignity
alone in the dark
Copyright ©
Merkaba
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2003-02-12 12:30:00]
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Re: caress
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by lil_angel on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 01:50:00 PM AEST
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| another great write :) keep them coming |
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Re: caress
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by Paul on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:10:30 PM AEST
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| that gives me a great picture of how your feeling, I like it a lot. |
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Re: caress
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by Merkaba on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:11:33 PM AEST
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| thx angel ;) |
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Re: caress
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by Merkaba on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 07:12:47 PM AEST
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| thanks for the comment friend, i'm glad you enjoyed it. |
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Re: caress
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 05:36:20 PM AEST
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Lovely write....welcome to ypdc...
Jenni |
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Re: caress
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by riverofwords on
Sunday, 16th February 2003 @ 06:46:54 AM AEST
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well done good write .can identify with this one
peace be your journey
terry |
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Re: caress
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:58:30 AM AEST
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| sadness and beauty... wonderful for poetry when hand in hand... very good poem :) |
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Re: caress
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 11:51:27 PM AEST
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| my first reation is awww, huggs, yet such quiet beauty here................ |
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Re: caress
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by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:00:01 AM AEST
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| kind of sad but very beautiful |
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