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Suffercate
Contributed by
Exodus
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Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 01:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Cut me down, cut me up
Screaming in the dark, all out of luck
Wasting my time, wasting all of yours
Tripping over bottles, locking all the doors
Eyes wide open, eyes wide shut
Terrible feeling, middle of my gut
Ashtrays and defeat
I hope you and I never meet
Got to whisper, got to cry
Got to smile, got to die
Everything is terrible, everything is great
Windowless room, lying awake
Write you a letter, write you a song
Lying awake for way to damn long
See you tomorrow, see you never again
I feel suffocated, gin gin gin gin
Copyright ©
Exodus
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2006-08-25 13:49:21]
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Re: Suffercate
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by MidnightPunkCat on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:21:13 PM AEST
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| I think this is a frikan awesome poem for when your sick of people keep writing |
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Re: Suffercate
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by alasdaircairns on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 04:12:55 PM AEST
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| Great write with a superb last line gin gin gin. I like this a lot. |
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Re: Suffercate
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by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:03:37 AM AEST
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i love the paradoxes in this, pure genius... brilliant write,
2sdyx |
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