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Closed Doors
Contributed by
Circa
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Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 02:11:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
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What is he thy benevolent
True, but unjust
Of only thy saviours
Eyes closed and berate
Beggar at the bottom
A falliced fate
Spit, spit, aimed at your eye
It wasnt me who made you blind
Thy heart, Thy soul
has betray
Dont trust, know, love
find the way
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Circa
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2006-08-25 14:11:52]
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Re: Closed Doors
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by emystar on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 03:13:08 AM AEST
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Very intriging write.
It's like it's a parable.
good work.
huggs,
emy |
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