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ABSTRUSE
Contributed by
boobiepeach
on
Friday, 25th August 2006 @ 04:42:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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look at your disheveled hands and waist
the clounds have rained on them too long you gasp
claimed silently with vicious words; i am not a callow sole of waste
but our countries have such sad amity in distrust that callow is to fine a word
your mind is so gravid with thought but have no ones toes aching but mine
i limn your moves and ways and smell in dreams and mares at night
but vapid are they when taken out for others to view
again too busy to care for someone elses thought
they are not about you so what is the worry
abstruse forever and never again
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2006-08-25 16:42:40]
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Re: ABSTRUSE
(User Rating: 1 )
by detourchick on
Saturday, 7th October 2006 @ 12:08:37 AM AEST
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| really really good but u spelt clouds wrong |
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