|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
Bleed to death
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 01:40:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
|
Choking back the words
I scream as if
afraid that he
might hurt me
my eyes are so intense
but bleed nonstop
and tears continue
to trickle out
like the words you
use to break my heart,
to bend my body,
like a soul ripped inward and
I'm nothing
nothing but sick
inside
my pulp exposed
and shone naked
like those chilling
breaths you
take in
order to say
that my cries
are useless and
unborn to this night
where I sleep in
the backseat,
strapped into an
elusive memory..
You knew I'd bleed to death.
Copyright ©
Inevitable
... [
2006-08-26 01:40:19]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: Bleed to death
(User Rating: 1 )
by twbanter on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 07:19:28 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
Wow, I feel te pain.... Ouch
Tom W |
|
|
Re: Bleed to death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 08:10:51 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
awesome, i love this! the imagery and metaphors are awesome, and it flows really well, great write!
2sdyx |
|
|
Re: Bleed to death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 09:48:07 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
excruiciating
That last line is severe!! Very emotional and
gripping piece throughout. Excellent descriptions ..
~Breezy |
|
|
Re: Bleed to death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bound on
Saturday, 26th August 2006 @ 04:57:36 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow....just wow |
|
|
Re: Bleed to death
(User Rating: 1 )
by Hiddendarkness1705 on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 01:18:44 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow you show such emotion that I feel it too..you are an awesome writer |
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
