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the hurt
Contributed by
sha-wales
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Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 01:22:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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i visit you every week.
by your grave
i take my seat
i sit and talk to you a while
i try and be strong for mam & dad
the tears i hide, deep inside
but it hurts to much,
so alone i cry.
you got to be strong, you tell me
i don`t think i can, not when your gone from me..
so i take my seat, and weep
and remember the good old days
when we were kids
so carefree,,
it`s here i feel close to you
by your grave..
but it hurts,because i know your not coming home
where you should be
you promised me you`d be around
i believed you, so why did you hurt me
love you always bro xxxx
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2006-08-27 13:22:55]
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Re: the hurt
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by Live2Die on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 01:46:11 PM AEST
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A heartfelt tragedy. I hope you have true friends to help you through this, and I am sure you know that the majority of us here at ypdc are here for you as well.
The poem hits home, because I fear losing one of my brothers.
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Re: the hurt
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by artjunkiekyle on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 04:31:43 PM AEST
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I'M SO SORRY I HOPE YOU'RE COPING WELL. I KNOW YOUR BROTHER IS WATCHING OVER YOU FROM HEAVEN, AND SOMEDAY YOU'LL BE WITH HIM AND YOU CAN LIVE ON IN HEAVEN PEACEFULLY. UNTIL THEN YOU'LL BE WITHOUT BUT ITS ALL WORTH IT.
BEAUTIFULLY WRITTEN! |
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