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Speak My Mind
Contributed by
Ruby2sdy
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Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 06:38:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Walking down a lonely street,
So familiar to my feet,
Nothing left for me to find;
Perhaps its time to speak my mind,
On my own in this dark hour,
Escaping feelings both sweet and sour,
Fully formed yet undefined;
Perhaps its time to speak my mind,
Lost within a darkened room,
Drowning in a sea of gloom,
Cannot flee the daily grind,
Perhaps its time to speak my mind,
So many lost, yet more in pain,
Life has nothing more to gain,
Needing time to unwind,
Perhaps its time to speak my mind,
Wonder where he sleeps tonight,
My star shining, guiding light,
Time worn and ragged, wrinkled and lined;
Perhaps its time to speak my mind.
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Ruby2sdy
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2006-08-27 18:38:33]
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by alasdaircairns on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 06:44:14 PM AEST
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| Perhaps it is Rubes two shoes. Your poems are too sweet for words sometimes. Perfectly pained and soulful. x |
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by deadheadpoet on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 09:46:53 PM AEST
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Good write. I loved your rhyming scheme. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 27th August 2006 @ 10:25:21 PM AEST
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I wanna know if ya fell off the "tightrope" and, if ya did,
at which verse was it? I can tell ya weren't tipsy for the write has coherency, but there is an edge. A very fleeting edge. Nice work.
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 02:33:03 AM AEST
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To speak your mind, you feel is right,
But wait a while, until its light.
Loved this one, we all can identify with it. But saying that , I do speak my mind sometimes, an afterwards wish I hadn't. Some things are just best left unsaid.
The rhyming is really good, it flows so well. Sue x |
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by trini on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:26:42 AM AEST
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This was sweet. i really liked the way you wrote it
thanks for the post
keep up the great work
-Trini |
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:18:17 PM AEST
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| Lovely poem Ruby. xxx |
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Re: Speak My Mind
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by JGB on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:45:13 PM AEST
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OHHH Boy! I understand!
Don't know what more can be said.
In my case it's a blended family and my husband drives me nuts. Speaking my mind only causes pain most of the time, or a fight.
Should i speak or shut up? Oh well, I speak anyway!
I do get it. Thank you for letting me know i'm not alone.
joanna |
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