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Eden
Contributed by
TwistedCage
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:00:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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(Paradise lost and found)
Creations wonder birthed
of a virginal mass
within this darkened void
life was born.
Mother earth
is but the hand of God
creating a paradise
even unto this day...
Existing to nurture mankind
The earth, the waters
the air, and life.
Dominion granted
over all these things.
A king of sorts
were living
within this
mighty realm...
Yes, in Eden we surly dwell.
Copyright ©
TwistedCage
... [
2006-08-28 00:00:15]
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Re: Eden
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by trini on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:24:36 AM AEST
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Not bad
a little sparce
but i liked it
keep up the good work
-Trini |
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Re: Eden
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:28:44 PM AEST
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Great write. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Eden
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by Skillz on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 02:34:02 AM AEST
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| very nice poem !! i feel the same |
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Re: Eden
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by StormyNites on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 03:33:53 AM AEST
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| I think it was the simplicity of the words that made this work so well..anything more would have seemed contrived..great poem |
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