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Time
Contributed by
twbanter
on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 08:31:08 AM in AEST
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So at last we meet
On this desolate street
I knew it would happen
I sneak then I peak
But finally you found me
And now its complete
Time, you bastard
Caught up with me I see
I tried to avoid you
But you just kept coming
I tried to ignore you
But you bested me
When you caught me slumming
And now I cant loose you
Youre way too cunning
So I guess this is it
You dictate my end
As far as companions
Youre certainly no friend
And you have exacted
The moments Ill spend
And know all my quests
Right down to the end
And the end
Only time will tell
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twbanter
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Re: Time
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by trini on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 08:48:48 AM AEST
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this was good.
i dont always like long rhyming schemes
but you pulled it off nicely
keep up the good work
-Trini |
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Re: Time
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by JockPhillips on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:38:21 AM AEST
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| Time you bastard is a good line from this here poem. I think I liked the poem alright and keep up the doing good. |
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Re: Time
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 10:29:40 AM AEST
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Cool write. Great flow. The first stanza was my fav. Great lines and good rhythmic flow.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: Time
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by candysears on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:00:22 PM AEST
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Nice write..Very nice flow..
Blessings
C.S |
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Re: Time
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by lillyjane on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 12:03:16 PM AEST
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| I really thought this poem is great, time waits for no man, can be your enemy to.. You have to do everything now that you want before its to late..xxx |
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