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Forest Fire
Contributed by
Exodus
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Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:35:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I followed you into the woods last evening
It was there I learned that seeing was believing
You made me carry a can of gasoline
But, I don't think you know what I mean
I wanted to run and I wanted to hide
I wanted to tell you the truth but I probably lied
And then there came the flames
Seems to me its not important to be on a list of names
Burning, my world is burning
No one stops to think and the world keeps turning
The smoke suffocates the pain away
The fire burns the moments of yesterday
Who I am and what shall I be?
Pyrotechmatic, self destructive, oh me
So you smile, so you frown
You go straight up and end up straight down
Light the fires, waste every good intention you ever had
Things are good, things are bad
And you're hungry, empty like my hello
My mind is wild and yours is mellow
I smile for you, you frown at me
I was faking it, so quite impossibly
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Re: Forest Fire
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by trini on
Monday, 28th August 2006 @ 09:39:08 AM AEST
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This has two meaning hidden in it and my mind keeps racing between them
this is how a poem should be delivered.
keeping the reader thinking
thank you for the brilliant post
and i hope to see more
keep up the great work :)
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