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The Vision
Contributed by
Jaya
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Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InspirationalPoems
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I look from my window and what do I see...
Its the kind of sight that looks paradise to me-
that's the ocean synonymous with my life...
and those waves are the opportunities I lost because of internal strife.
But this time I can see my sun up high;
And instead of giving up I'd much rather die.
I don't want to sit back waiting as I watch my ship go by...
cause it holds dreams for a person called "I".
So I"ll face my fears..
And I"ll wipe my tears.
I'll strain every part of me to succeed...
and no matter how long it takes I will not accede.
As I look at this sight I think and think-
For fear of losing this vision I shudder to blink!
Then all of a sudden I realise:
I gaze and gaze with open eyes...
This sight this paradise is the bliss of solitude-
and now I know I'm on the path of rectitude.
Copyright ©
Jaya
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2003-02-12 18:40:00]
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Re: The Vision
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 01:42:02 PM AEST
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Great write... one thing I have to say is awesome rhymes! I don't even know what accede means and it's not all that often I come across a word I don't know! lol...rhyme on! :)
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Re: The Vision
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by kolbrun on
Monday, 17th March 2003 @ 06:16:42 AM AEST
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fireal, keep up the good work.
yours Kolbrún |
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