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secret silenss
Contributed by
The_Unknown
on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 09:21:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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you dont know what its like
to be me
i cant tell people anything
i dont let people see me
i hide myself
i hide myself well
no one can find me
trapped within myself
i cant tell anyone anything
the little secrets i hide from so many
people see me
they think they know me
but they dont
arnt i a good actress?
living my life
fakeing the smile
pretending im happy
like everythings alright
why cant i stop the lies
and show the world
who i really am?
why do so many tell me their secrets?
i already have so many
why must i add theirs?
i dont need the burden
im so sorry if some leaked out
im sorry if thats so bad
so hate me tomarrow!
hate me today!
i cant
i cant do this any more!
i just want to scream!
let me out!
just stop all of this!
no
i dont want to know!
im sorry if youre mad
im so sorry i told
forgive me
i could not keep any more
why cant i tell the whole world
who i
really am?
i just want to cry
i just want to scream
i feel so alone...
so hate me tomarrow!
hate me today!
as long as youre happy
everythings okay
no matter how you feel about me
as long as youre happy
everything
will always
be alright
i feel so alon
i cant tell you anything
you cant see past my words
those words that you hear
they mean the opposite
cant you tell?
so blinded my words
nothing is okay
cant you tell
that nothing
at all
is alright?
cant you see?
can anyone see me?
am i really here?
cant they tell im not alright?
i feel so alone
i want to let go
but still
i hold on
im holding on that extra second
because
im waiting for that one person
that has enough courage
to dig deep enough
someone willing to find the real me
someone who cares
but for now
im still holding on
still locked inside myself
waiting
...i feel so alone
alone in this world...
Copyright ©
The_Unknown
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2006-08-30 09:21:40]
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Re: secret silenss
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by StormyNites on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 02:19:33 PM AEST
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| your poem completely touched me..describing me..how many more feel this way? thank you for putting into words..how i too feel |
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Re: secret silenss
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 30th August 2006 @ 02:25:17 PM AEST
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Well, first ... greetings from a fellow northwesterner. Technically, I think you could clear up a few minor spelling errors ( probably one of my biggest pet peeves ) ... most poems I tend to turn away from if I see to many ... it feels to me as if the author isn't making the attemt to put forth any effort to clearly express themselves. That said ... you held me despite that fact. I have a daughter that feels much the same thoughts that this write expresses. I think she would empathize greatly.
Nazmythian ~ |
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Re: secret silenss
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by aniT on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:53:44 PM AEST
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Some tears actually came to my eyes as read your poem. Its comforting to know that I am not the only person who fights that battle of hiding and puts on a false smile for others. I too am hoping to cross paths with the one to see pass my front and help me with my hurt. Beautiful poem.
~Tina T. |
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Re: secret silenss
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by MyNameIsFred on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 09:47:20 AM AEST
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that was a really good poem it flowed nicley
loved it |
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