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So Far Away, Yet So Close
Contributed by
Willofree
on
Thursday, 31st August 2006 @ 05:16:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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From every waking hour we spent
To wayward absence, that time must bear
Although no longer present
Your fragrance still lingers in the air
Especially during the night fears
When my pillow soaks up all my tears
The parting scene in my minds eye
Supposedly a separation of a temporary kinid
But was it really a lie
Questions keep invading my mind
From which no answer we choose
Regarding length and time issues
May the distance be measured in mind
Rather than regular time
Where thought and heartbeat are assigned
To depict a mode of travel of some other kind
To transcend all the miles apart
Measure the distance by the beat of the heart
I envision the day you left
As your departing figure vanished
You became but an imagined silhouette
Both feeling at a disadvantage
Separation became our sad refrain
Absence measured by heartache and pain
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2006-08-31 17:16:03]
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Re: So Far Away, Yet So Close
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by deadheadpoet on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:05:37 AM AEST
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"Absence measured by heartache and pain" those were some words I felt like I could relate to. This was an all over fantastic write. As always filling those of us who read you, with more wisdom of life. Your a poet I learn from, glad to read you.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: So Far Away, Yet So Close
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by evolon on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:14:16 PM AEST
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| great write it reminds me of feelings and memories not too long faded ... thanks for sharing |
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Re: So Far Away, Yet So Close
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 08:01:11 PM AEST
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Oh wil .. this one touched me so very deeply. How deeply,
I could never truly convey.
Thank you for this. It's incredibly moving. I'm sure I am
not the only one here who will see that .. : ) I have to
say, the words, sentiments and style of this are
positively captivating. My favourite of yours, thus far.
so painfully beautiful.
~Breezy |
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Re: So Far Away, Yet So Close
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:27:53 PM AEST
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*hugs you tight*
Thanks for your PM about this, Will. I'm honoured, truly.
And my write does yours no justice. You took my idea and completely made it yours. Well done.
I love this Will, the depth of emotion is fabulous.
Great write,
*hugs*
Phil xxx |
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Re: So Far Away, Yet So Close
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by Nazmythian on
Thursday, 19th October 2006 @ 04:23:55 PM AEST
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Ok Terry ... Fess up .... ( iffin you can recollect what poem it was ) ... I wanna know what so moved you as to put this together after having read it !!!!! C'mon ... out with it !!!!
I enjoyed the change in rhyme scheme here ... I don't believe I have seen you utilize such before, it was a pleasant treat !!!
Nazzy ~ |
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