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Michelle
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:34:49 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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As I sit reflecting on what we had
Im not angry anymore just very sad
The times we had during those days
When the times were high in many ways
I had dreams of you and me. We were together
And now were not and Im in stormy weather
You broke my heart the day you were gone
This pile of dead weight is what you spawned
I once stood tall and held my head up
You turned me into a baby who cant get up
I'm looking in the mirror and dont like what I see
But a crying big baby looking back at me
My friends see me as changed
My entire life has been rearranged
Im not the man I used to be
My soul is in bitter agony
I wish I could get you out of my mind
What you did is so unkind
I gave you my life and you took my soul
Now to crawl inside, Im digging a hole
I never will again face the torment
My Love is gone and my mind is spent
I want you you want him
My life is hanging from life and limb
You broke my heart the day you were gone
This pile of dead weight is what you spawned
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Re: Michelle
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by Sasha on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:56:42 AM AEST
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| So well expressed...hope you get over the pain soon, when you hurt for someone so much, it points to your capacity to love too, doesnt it? |
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Re: Michelle
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by sadaddy on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:00:13 AM AEST
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Wow, dude. This is a heart wrenching read. I feel for you guy. Wish you the best. Men are not the only heart breakers. Take care dude.
sadaddy
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Re: Michelle
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by Skillz on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 01:17:22 AM AEST
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| Such a heart breaking read..so different from your previous work..this left me feeling so sad for you and angry at the girl..hoping things look up for you. K&H |
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Re: Michelle
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 12th September 2006 @ 10:51:01 PM AEST
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Bad Michelle bad bad Michelle.
I can say that since it isnt me who Im referring too.
This is heartbreaking I really feel ya here!!
Nicely written once again.
Michelle |
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