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drift
Contributed by
Merkaba
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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drift away
to that place of mine
so clean and pure
amidst the comforting darkness i wander
to feel
everything i need to continue
taken by its splendor
drifting further
locked in my nothing
my single everything
pleasant yet sad
even so
i'm drawn there more and more
drift with me if you will
let yourself go with me
we can wander
open our minds together
lets be quiet now
and drift together
minds clean of our impurities
oh it feels....nice
drift
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2003-02-13 00:00:00]
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Re: drift
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by lil_angel on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:26:23 AM AEST
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| wow the poems are getting better and better! i really did go away in this poem. Keep them coming! |
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Re: drift
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by karoody on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 02:35:35 AM AEST
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| a strong sense of peacefulness...thank you |
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Re: drift
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by LadyDama on
Wednesday, 19th February 2003 @ 02:55:45 AM AEST
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| very peaceful... and great use of opposites (nothing and everything)... |
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Re: drift
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by kolbrun on
Tuesday, 15th April 2003 @ 10:02:53 AM AEST
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These poems are so very beautiful. I like the way you write.
your Kolbrun |
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