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again and again
Contributed by
In_a_While
on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 12:26:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
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memory take away the gray
i could let it fade til May
Nothing can become my smile
i can't stand to face my trial
bowling souls for bubblegum
rules that break and sink the sun
Nothing loves like the line
i walk it well and sip on wine
never make me love her sin
i can't run so i let her in
tear this heart apart my friend
let this movie nightmare end
again and again
dw
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Re: again and again
(User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 12:35:08 PM AEST
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simply brillant... Loved the flow and the word choice.... surprised that I am the first one to comment... This really is a very well written poem...
Take care
christina |
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