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I wish the whispers were more painted illusions.
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 02:18:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i wish the whispers were more painted illusions,
maybe then,
i could break this emotion.
maybe if it wasn't true,
i could ignore all the things you did.
how you screwed me over,
made me feel so worthless.
i wish i wasn't another of your victims,
i wish i i'd never met you Chris,
i wish you'd never touched me,
preyed, on my vulnerablity...
but once you had me where you wanted me,
you did things i still want to protect you for...
because i still love you,
and that just makes this all hurt more.
you've vemonized my feelings,
you broke my inner shell,
but atleast you're locked in prison now,
atleast you're going back to hell.
i just wish the truth was a painted illusion,
coz maybe then,
i could break this emotion.
and escape and not be such a burden.
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2006-09-01 14:18:23]
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Re: I wish the whispers were more painted illusions.
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Monday, 18th September 2006 @ 12:54:10 PM AEST
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I liked this.. I liked how you expressed your thoughts.. It was avery deep poem..
great poem
christina |
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Re: I wish the whispers were more painted illusions.
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 04:14:48 PM AEST
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To be honest there are some parts which aren't quite perfect but boy...is it great
"i wish you'd never touched me,
preyed, on my vulnerablity..."
*searching for right words*...I really can't tell how much I like this |
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