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The Point of Life
Contributed by
jerseysue
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Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 06:33:12 PM in AEST
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What is it that we live and breath,
Work so hard to each day to achieve,
Sacrifices we sometimes make
Do we learn from our mistakes,
Is sadness just a learning curve,
And is happiness what we deserve,
Does crying ease the wretched pain,
Or does it make us strong again,
Does pride become before a fall,
Does self importance make us tall,
Are we so blind we cannot see,
The beauty in this world there be,
So what is life , what is its reason,
Is there a point, in every season,
Is it a sin, or is it a blessing,
Is life for living, or am I just guessing?
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Re: The Point of Life
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by twbanter on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 06:47:29 PM AEST
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Nice Sue.... If that tuly be your name.... Dame! He, he, he.
I liked it
It asked some real questions
with a nice
Smooth poetic blend
And isn't that we want to achieve
In the end?
Or maybe that's just me....
Sorry, I'm upset that I couldn't do my "Flowers" poem, because this site is so idiotic, it recorded one poem I wrote twice! Aaaarrghhh! (Sorry for rhyming I mean)
Tom W
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Re: The Point of Life
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by JGB on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 12:37:54 AM AEST
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Wow!
Sometimes I don't know either.
I am wondering now, still, oh well, life is life and I'm good to go.
Beautiful write!
Love u
Joanna |
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Re: The Point of Life
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by emystar on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 02:51:50 AM AEST
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Hi Sue,
this is a remarkable write!
We all ask questions but in our darkest hour we all find our own inner answers.
Friend that makes this write a masterpeice.
luv ya friend,
emy |
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Re: The Point of Life
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by allforyou on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 08:46:00 AM AEST
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Re: The Point of Life
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 10:28:30 AM AEST
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| We do all ask questions, dont know if we will ever find the answers.. Great poem again Sue. xxx |
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Re: The Point of Life
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 06:40:27 PM AEST
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interesting musings, sue..
A very poetic query into the meanings of life,
and the point, therein. I love the last line. That
sorta sums it all up, doesn't it?
Live. It's not enough to just exist ..
~Breezy
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Re: The Point of Life
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:35:32 PM AEST
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Fantastic. reminded me a little of my "fly free" poem. Brilliant last lines,
Is it a sin, or is it a blessing,
Is life for living, or am I just guessing?
I suppose we don't really know what we're doing, we can just..live, and hope it all works out...
great write, loved it,
--talli |
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