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Satan Lives In Me
Contributed by
AmberJoy
on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:10:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I'm trying to keep my composure,
but i can't because I'm too weak.
I'm rotting like a dead body,
and ill rot til i can't speak.
Over the years i watched things die
from setting foot on Satan's path.
I felt him kill all the good in me,
Inside my veins i felt his wrath.
I felt him gnaw away at my flesh,
rotting my insides to the surface.
He gave to me his name,
and denied me of my purpose.
He told me to hide my pain,
not to let anyone i know see.
Because if they looked into my eyes
they'd see the sickness of him in me.
He put the vicious memories in my head,
he said i had to learn.
That the people i thought loved me
lead me down this path to burn.
No one ever loved me.
He said my eyes were too blind to see.
And every time i didn't realize it
His poison ate a little bit more of the heart in me.
Pretty soon there'll be nothing left
the poisons eating at my core
And ill continue swallowing the reasons
til i can breathe no more.
He told me he's here to choose my future
Since i ***** up choosing my past.
He told me to look at all the beauty i had left,
and my reflection broke the glass.
He said face it you'll never be beautiful
there's nothing left for you.
People only see your imperfections
they'll never see the love that lys in you.
I started picking up the glass
How could my reflection make it fall apart
Each tiny fragment of glass
Represented Satan in my heart.
He told me not to open up to people
not to let my feelings show
Because they'd see my insides rotting
from the things i cant let go.
He put the anger inside of me
led the hatred through my vein.
He'll continue controlling my thoughts
as they eat away my brain.
He said i had to learn
and pain was the only way to see
That i'll continue to rot
Because he'll forever live in me
Copyright ©
AmberJoy
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Re: Satan Lives In Me
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by emystar on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 09:30:35 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
A little Satan lives in us all but we must strieve to be more like jesus.
huggs,
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Re: Satan Lives In Me
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by twbanter on
Friday, 1st September 2006 @ 11:52:34 PM AEST
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Wow! You have a talent for writting. Keep it up!
No one ever loved me.
I don't believe that.
Here you are loved
And if you only knew how much your Mom loved you when you were born... you'd cry at the pain she'd be feeling if she read this.
Ask yourself, who do "I" love. Look within... Who do YOU love? Hopefully yourself first......
Eeerrr, and not Satan....
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Re: Satan Lives In Me
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by lillyjane on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 04:32:17 AM AEST
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| I CAN COMPLETLY UNDER STAND WHAT YOU ARE SAYING, SATAN WANTS US TO BE UNHAPPY... YOU HAVE TO FIGHT YOUR FEELINGS.. TELL SATAN TO GET LOST. XXXX |
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Re: Satan Lives In Me
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by lostinmyself on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 04:42:38 PM AEST
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Wow, this is a good write. It could do with a spell check and some punctuation, but the content is really good.
I guess we all live in this, but you can beat it. Don't let your own insecurity and doubt speak for you. I lived that way for too long, and know how hard it is. Don't let it beat you.
Good write I am sure many can relate to.
*hugs*
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Re: Satan Lives In Me
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by Oneir8dude on
Tuesday, 26th September 2006 @ 12:16:05 AM AEST
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SATAN! I CAST THEE OUT!
THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELLS YOU!
THE POWER OF CHRIST COMPELLS YOU!
Man You can get rid of him yourself... you don't need me... I liked the flow of your words... very smooth... I'll pick Jesus though LOL
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Re: Satan Lives In Me
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by necrophilia_lord-abortion on
Friday, 29th December 2006 @ 12:49:56 AM AEST
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wat is up with all these christians???
satan is a purity of darkness but will do good to the deserving, he is not the evil that you all see him as, the true evil is christ, who hides in the clothing of light to appear perfect and good...satan, will not harm u, if u dont harm him, u be nice to him, he will return u with the same favor...but ur poem isnt that bad, and im new to this website but i hope some people will view my poem, its sorta like this poem in the sense that it speaks about myself, but its more about abortions, necrophilia and the anti-christ...i hope ppl like it... |
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