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''Gone''
Contributed by
beautiful_loser
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Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 05:39:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I thought it would make things easier if I were gone
I thought it would make you happy if i wasnt there
All the awful things we said to each other
All the stupid games I tried to play
Im sorry I didnt let you in
I was blind, faded, and didnt have a clue
But it always seemed you had something better to do
I thought it would make things easier for you if I were gone
Now i sorry but its all done...gone
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2006-09-02 17:39:02]
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Re: ''Gone''
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by Rhei76 on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 08:20:09 PM AEST
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short closer
i'm sure many can identify
good write |
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Re: ''Gone''
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:52:07 AM AEST
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How sad
well i hope your doing better.
good write |
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Re: ''Gone''
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by Cathi on
Monday, 19th January 2009 @ 12:41:02 AM AEST
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| This is sad indeed. I love the finality of the last line; it leaves no doubt that the tragedy of the title is indeed accurate. |
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