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Think Not
Contributed by
Lone_er
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Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:06:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Think Not
Think not I do not love you
More and more with every passing day
Think not my heart is silent
Though I go away
Think not I do not whisper
I love you every night as I go to bed
Think not every morning I awake
Upon my lips your name is read
Think not I have forgotten
Your blue eyes and lovely smile
Think not I do not every moment
Wish we could visit alone for a while
Think not I do not miss your heart
Your sparkling eyes speaking passion to me
Think not I do not feel the love
You dare not let me see
Rather think of me as man
Who every day thanks God above
You esteemed my heart worthy
Your own to love!
Russ
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Lone_er
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2006-09-02 21:06:04]
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Re: Think Not
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by billabong_megan on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:26:24 PM AEST
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| beautiful poem |
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Re: Think Not
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by alecfernadez on
Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:32:51 PM AEST
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this was beautifully written, in terms of poetic imagery and flair. However there seems to be a few problems with pacing, it's hard to read out loud. It happens alot, its just some lines seem out of place and too long which disrupts the flow of the poem. Thats just my opinion though.
Nice Write.
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Re: Think Not
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:29:40 AM AEST
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Very beautifull-n-tender.
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