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Fathom (o6o6o5 part I)
Contributed by
rhei76
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Saturday, 2nd September 2006 @ 09:48:38 PM in AEST
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As for me, what can I say. I'm
still the same, I refuse to change,
so I stay neutral with the pain
that tells me I'm not happy, yet
this is okay, since I'm seldom sad
and hardly ever angry,
although a million of them
would gladly say,
I'm still mad
On the course of my direction, I have
encumbered a great, a many things.
Like the seasons pass, so watch life.
Like the seasons start, all recycles.
While we're on this note
I still fathom the end
and I pray everyone
is alright with what they left
if we were all but merely men
then we would have no self regret
I still fathom the end
and know I'm half way there
I'm okay
I'm happy with what I have
It's alright
It's alright
this makes me unsad
As for you, I will still pray. You've
found your thing, that releases you're pain.
That keeps you beautiful and out of the rain.
This will tell me it's okay.
I'm not happy, but I'm seldom sad
and hardly ever angry,
although a million of them
would loudly say
I'm still mad
For this course, my ill attraction I have
subcum to a great, a many things
Like the seasons are, so is life
Like the season is, so let it be
While we're on this note
I still fathom closure
and I pray for them all
It's alright the things we left behind
If we were more than only men
then we could go with out feeling again
but
I still fathom
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rhei76
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Re: Fathom (o6o6o5 part I)
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:00:17 AM AEST
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Very wise u r.
Awesome work.
huggs, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Fathom (o6o6o5 part I)
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 04:44:05 AM AEST
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| Fathom we all do, for what ever reason or purpose. One day ,maybe we will know all the answers, but will we be happy with them. I doubt it, so will stay undecided. A thought provoking write, but also a hint of mans weakness in feeling emotions. Thank you for sharing. Sue x |
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