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Serenity
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 01:55:26 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Sitting on the shore watching the waves churn
Feeling the love and the things I can learn
I hold them in my heart so tight
And know these feelings are so right
The thought of joy comes over me
And I quickly become so very free
The seagulls soaring up above
My heart so full of love
I watch the sun set over the ocean
And the peacefulness starts in motion
The wave crash against the shore
I have no worries anymore
On my lips, I feel the warm salt air
Instantly I feel for what I care
White caps crashing into each other
My mind wanders very much further
Walking along the white sandy beach
I think of things that nature can teach
The seagulls teach us freedom
That we feel so very seldom
The sunset so beautiful
Makes us so grateful
The sounds of crashing waves
Gives us the peace that God gave
Take these words I give you
And know I wish I were there too
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oneir8dude
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Re: Serenity
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by Skillz on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 02:26:00 AM AEST
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| that so describes where im at..ty for such a wonderful poem !!! K&H |
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Re: Serenity
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by jerseysue on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 09:16:27 AM AEST
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This is what I do sometimes on my day off. I sit and watch the waves. Nature in all its glory.
Your poem does give a feeling of serenity, but also a feeling of loneliness, or have I misinterprated it. Well wether or not I have, I thought it was a wonderful poem. Sue x |
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Re: Serenity
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by emystar on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:05:44 AM AEST
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Thanks,
It's been a while since I've been to the beach but u took me there.
Simply beautifull work of art.
huggs.
emy |
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