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No More
Contributed by
MaskOfLife
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 03:04:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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Hard to imagine that one day you was here
Living life with fun, love and no fear
Writing this makes me drop a tear
Heaven opened their gates and let you in
Earth commited it's worst sin
By taking you away
Why couldn't you be an angel another day
No more laughter just sorrow
Why does inside feel so hollow
Living for today,not bothered about tomorrow
Only so much I can say
Till I realise you are not here to stay
Passin through briefly
Jus enough time to let me know you here with me
Keep asking Why?
How come the young always become first to die?
The one's who never do wrong
We take them to their last destination with their favorite song
It could be me It could be you
Time will only tell what it will do
Simple but short
Copyright ©
MaskOfLife
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2006-09-03 15:04:58]
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Re: No More
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 10:57:34 PM AEST
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So sorry for your loss.
Beautifull writing.
huggs, prayer,
emy |
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by drtylilsecret on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 10:58:00 PM AEST
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very sad....good write though.
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:51:03 PM AEST
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Why is a question I used to ask, but if we had an answer, would we be any wiser. Grief is hard,and also quite impossible to explain.
A thought provoking write, I feel for you at this sad time, but things do get easier, I know from experience. Sue x |
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Re: No More
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by deadclown on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 07:11:50 PM AEST
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'we take them to their last destination with their favourite song'
This line is somehow beautiful. I can't really explain why. Jus that it kinda got to me a bit.
Quite emotional piece
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Re: No More
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by shelby on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 10:13:30 PM AEST
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I felt this deeply. A very beautiful moving write. I'm sorry for your loss. I understand this well and yes that question why?
Michelle |
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