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Mighty Flame
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 09:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I saw from the beach while morning was shining,
A ship oe'r the waters move gloriously on.
I came back when the sun oe'r that beach was declining;
And the ship that was there and the waters were gone.
So such is the fate of life's early day
In passing the spring-tide of joy we have known;
Each wave that we dance 'round in morning gives way
And leaves us at eve on the sea-shore alone.
Ne'er tell me of glories serenely adorning
The close of the day nor calm of the night,
Give back to me the wild freshness of morning;
Her clouds and her tears, more worthy a light.
Who would not welcome that moment's returning,
When passion awakened new life in its name;
For my soul like the coal that gives light in its burning,
Gives out all its own to love's mighty flame!
B
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by emystar on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 09:50:07 PM AEST
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Don't change a thing!
It's an awesome, powerfull, tranquill, dynamically beautifull.
Big ole smiles,
emy |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:03:44 PM AEST
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dearest luv, what a fine blend of words,
sentiment and heart ..
the last stanza is exquisitely stunning and
truely telling. Would that my words could match
the beauty and grace yours always embody.
I hear echoes here .. I feel them, mayhaps
even louder than the sound they emit. One of
the more beautiful things in your writes has
always been, for me, the amount of you I
find in them. Sometimes hidden, sometimes
softly lurking, but ever and always, a full emotion
of you moves me in a way that is gentle and rare ~
touched beyond xo
~Breezy
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by ever1der on
Sunday, 3rd September 2006 @ 11:52:05 PM AEST
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Beautiful; just beautiful.
mary |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by secretwind on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 12:17:06 AM AEST
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| this flow is so serene and as the others have said before me Beautiful. |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by twbanter on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 02:12:58 AM AEST
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Wow, B, that was good. Real good. A delicious read!
Emotions packed
adrift in this Sea
Tom W |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by jerseysue on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 02:30:35 AM AEST
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Why struggle! This is perfect. A truly wonderful poem. It was a pleasure to read it.
It flowed so well. Sue x |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by Jyssvw on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 10:36:27 AM AEST
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For personal reasons this write spoke to me, on a more global scale…it was fantastic as well… The true determinate of art.
Beautiful as always
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by secretwind on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 11:12:22 AM AEST
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I stand and applaud
good stuff great flow
well done..... |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by doug on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 12:42:14 AM AEST
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You've inspired me to get up early and
do something tomorrow! This is
great writing. wonderful stuff. Truly , Doug |
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Re: Mighty Flame
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 12:49:44 AM AEST
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wow Billy i am impress
Sorry about not commenting on any of your newest writes been gone .
and i had to create a new account because i forgot my password.lolanyways grea job
hugs
k |
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