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the Night of Awakening (Part one)
Contributed by
twbanter
on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 02:19:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
fictional
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I woke up and the trees were walking
Singing an eerie song
And whats worse
The rocks were singing along
I knew immediately
This was all wrong
I threw off my blanket
And it complained
Dont you know its early
And I have to lay here all day?!
Like the jerk you are
You dont care anyway
I looked at it in wonder
Then I said, okay
Theres something wrong with my head
Okay, Im still sleeping
YEAH! Thats it! I said
And this is something nasty I ate
In the morning things will be all right
And my blanket will have slept tight
The trees? Well theyll be trees innate
So I went and peed, then I took a drink
And I looked in the mirror
But looking back it wasnt me
And I screamed
But the mirror straightened me out
Whats YOUR problem it said
I said Im not sure
I thought I was dead
Man, and I mean man
You always were dead
Constantly, while styling your head
You kept staring at my face
Like it was something you dreadI
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Re: the Night of Awakening (Part one)
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by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 01:54:44 AM AEST
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lol that is very amusing funny write.
It made me laugh lol.
good job |
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Re: the Night of Awakening (Part one)
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:52:13 PM AEST
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| So funny, so good to just going to read part two.. Oooh that rymed.. xxx |
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