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The Serpent Awaits
Contributed by
doug
on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 11:47:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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A room in shadowed gloom doused in sweet red perfume eyes like a wolf of the cold and blackest heart
her tongue licked her teeth like sensuality caressing violence vampirical and lyrical like rain in the dark
An animal in a teal green dress corset strained by carnal thirst sexuality imprisoned , screaming 'neath the weight of proper decor
Her grin whispered silent dreams of awful and delicious things her breast seemed to swell and gorge with the maddening of the tempest roar
She then threw the shutters apart the storm howled like the morning star plummeting from cliffs of heaven into swirling abyss of gnashing teeth
She climbed down through the safe windows of our restraint and social credos into the vortex of unknown and the black of witches breath
Many years her vanished form lay heavy 'pon the shadowed gloom Still her smell of red perfume broods and breeds my saddness
In a letter written to her priest Said she , I am now releashed to wash my face , thoughts and teeth in the blood of bestial maddness
I've felt the seed of her infection knelt and gorged on blood seduction drained and decapitated the beasts in the late evening fields
Heed me now ye of the light taste not the flesh of the serpent's night farewell to you and the cliffs of heaven she awaits outside my window
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doug
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2006-09-04 23:47:22] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The Serpent Awaits
(User Rating: 1 ) by sadaddy on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 12:05:20 AM AEST (User
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Wow, you write with such power. Great job and take care, young man.
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Re: The Serpent Awaits
(User Rating: 1 ) by vampirequeen35 on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 12:54:23 AM AEST (User
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aww so beautiful this write.
you did great on this.
Its so nice to have a fellow dark writer as good as you here.so thanks for sharing |
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Re: The Serpent Awaits
(User Rating: 1 ) by True on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 03:59:28 PM AEST (User
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This is one of my favorites that you have written so far. The words have a beautiful flow to them, a dark seduction. I love it, awesome job. |
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Re: The Serpent Awaits
(User Rating: 1 ) by Voyager on
Wednesday, 15th December 2010 @ 04:53:54 AM AEST (User
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very imaginative |
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