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Death
Contributed by
asr898
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Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 06:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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I am going to draw a picture,
A picture with a twist
I'll Draw it with a razor,
I'll Draw it on my wrist...
This picture will draw blood,
It will finally be clear,
that all of my life's problems
have suddenly disappeared
Copyright ©
asr898
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2003-02-13 06:30:00]
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Re: Death
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:34:37 PM AEST
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Cute verse, Tony..but instead of playing artist with blood, I'd suggest you stick to cooking and playing your guitar!! Hope to see more poems here..
Welcome to YPDC....
Jenni |
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Re: Death
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by asr898 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 12:47:32 PM AEST
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| Thanx for the advice. It helps.l think i will stick to my guitar. I will try to finish working on the song i am writing. Hopefully i can maybe use one of your poems on one of them... |
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Re: Death
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:44:31 PM AEST
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| hmmmm.....hopefully you may come up with a new fantasy, bloody pictures leave us in the dark in the end. |
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Re: Death
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 12:44:55 PM AEST
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| welcome to ypdc, by the way |
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