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Pain
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 07:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Pain
Basting in the rain taking the pain
I know no feeling of this torture
Day by day I consume
This agony with no fear
Running away from these troubles
Its no use since its my shadow
When night falls it keeps with me
The troubles Ive seen
Conspire together
And try to overwhelm me
No way out I take the pain
No matter how much
Try as to overcome me
Im not one to fall
My feet are as the northern star
Rooted I stand unshaken through
The wind that passes by
My mind and body
Together withstand all
But one has leaked from within
It bleeds through
And to this I have fallen
I have been felled by it
And hope never to again
My heart
My love
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Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
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2003-02-13 07:00:00]
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Re: Pain
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:31:14 PM AEST
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Wow this was so good u describe your feelings so eloquently. No morbidness in this corner... keep on writing.
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Re: Pain
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 25th February 2003 @ 08:01:12 PM AEST
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| Sublime poetry ... I love the way you describe your pain as your shadow ... that is so true - something you can't shake off when your heart has been broken. ..... Jan |
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Re: Pain
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by wyrd_faerie on
Sunday, 23rd March 2003 @ 03:29:57 PM AEST
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