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To friends of the movie
Contributed by
rhei76
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Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 05:29:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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We'll make a movie of ya
Change names
& put a campfire aboard
We'll play words
& acknowledge facial sounds
Change raven & mouse abound
In order to the idols
Bright in the sky
As clouds be herded
Wise & ancient messengers
Playing for long
Triggering rain & gentle breeze
We'll sit below
& accent light
Move the stars
change the line
We'll make a movie of ya
Remembering nights in St. Pete
Days in the fields
Chasing the dawn
We'll make a movie
"Did you have a good world..."
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2006-09-05 17:29:04]
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Re: To friends of the movie
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by alasdaircairns on
Tuesday, 5th September 2006 @ 05:52:18 PM AEST
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| I really like this but must profess, despite all the clues, I can't work out what movie you're alluding to. But when I find out I shall read it once more. An excellent command of the English language.x |
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