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Eye's Anguish
Contributed by
Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 07:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Eyes Anguish
Watery eyes are the cause of my disturbance
Some kind agitation in my eyes
Tears overwhelm them and flood my vision
Hard to see past all thats come down
-Chorus-
I wipe at them
To clear up my sight
To forget my perplexity
But still something in my eyes
That makes them water
No matter how many times I blink
Still there remains that thing in my eyes
I keep seeing these delusion
Illusions from the past
So hard to see past these tears
-Chorus
I stop trying to get it out of my eyes
Just let it subside on its own
Maybe Ill get some rest
I cant seem to close my eyes
I keep seeing something
-Guitar Solo-
Night finally falls in my eyes
My mind is all rattled up with
The thought of that thing in my eyes
Light penetrates them
And I see youre not in my life
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Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow
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Re: Eye's Anguish
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by LOWMAN613 on
Thursday, 13th February 2003 @ 10:38:56 AM AEST
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| AAWW Beautifully done on this song,when does this come out on Cd??? Great one! Christina |
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Re: Eye's Anguish
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by venkat on
Friday, 14th February 2003 @ 01:23:26 AM AEST
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| A beautiful write .especially last stanza wraps it meening fully.. venkat |
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Re: Eye's Anguish
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 08:34:34 PM AEST
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This was very good it appears so peaceful yet the pain is very much there and I am sure felt by all who read this. You used the word 'eyes' to much, but oother than that its beautiful
Bobo (Joel) |
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