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Believe
Contributed by
oneir8dude
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Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 02:16:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
ChristianPoetry
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When I get to my final destination
And you ponder Gods creation
Torment and anger fills your heart
Thinking my death was cruel from the start
I died for you and yours
To cleanse you from your earthly woes
Dont hold your feelings of discontent
For those who did harm, its not what they meant
For as I told my father its true
They know not what they do
Just follow my ways and lead a good existence
For the pearly gates are large for such a small fence
Dont think bad thoughts or feel down
Just hold me in your heart and come around
Keep your head up and never look back
For if you do your time will slack
My time her was short, a mere 33 years
Dont sob or cry. Dont shed any tears
They did not kill me. It was my fathers way
Lose all bad thoughts and lose them today
Please keep in mind what I gave was free...
Just please don't forsake me..
You may find your wrong in your perception
Because I gave hope with my resurrection
So you and yours will one day see
Your souls will fly so carefree
Believe in me For one day I'll come again...
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Re: Believe
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by wrdz on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 04:57:40 PM AEST
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| Only small spelling errors, but other than that, the subject matter cancels them out. Some say seeing is believing, but in reality, believing will mean we will be able to see. Very good work. Thank you for sharing this. wrdz |
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Re: Believe
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by Skillz on
Wednesday, 6th September 2006 @ 11:46:30 PM AEST
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| What a wonderful way of saying this...thank you so much...H&K |
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