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Serenade
Contributed by
Man_On_High
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Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 11:41:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
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She is affection.. and the present,
Since she has made me, my heart
Open to autumn airs and ere,
To the gentle murmur of summer seas.
She is the charm of fleeing places
And the superhuman delight of my many stations..
She is affection and the future;
Love and strength whom we,
Standing in our rages
And our boredoms, see
Passing in the stormy sky
And banners of ecstasy.
She is love.. perfect measure reinvented..
Marvelous, unsought reason and eternity
And her presence shines.. an everlasting faith.
I have known the terror of her concessions
And of my own..and promise is made
In the soaring of our faculties,
Selfless and passionate;
Where love is for infinite life.
B
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2006-09-07 23:41:55]
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Re: Serenade
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by emystar on
Thursday, 7th September 2006 @ 11:51:09 PM AEST
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wow friend,
Don't know who she is but there's no doubt this write will seranade any ones heart and make them swell with pride.
Heavenly beautifull.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
emy |
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Re: Serenade
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by Vampirequeen on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:47:12 AM AEST
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I agree with what Emy said.
wow amazing job Billy.
Hmmm sounds like your in love. :)
hugs |
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Re: Serenade
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by lillyjane on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 05:07:23 AM AEST
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| I love it, wish someone would seranade me with words like this.. Beautiful. xxx |
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Re: Serenade
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 09:14:28 AM AEST
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Wow Billy! All of us here at YPDC can't wait 'till you git hitched (cowboy fer married) - fall in love. That's gonna bring out some more of this romantic love magnificence. Hope this is a find and not a fantasy fer ya!
wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Serenade
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by TwistedCage on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 12:17:49 PM AEST
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Very nice and gentle piece you got here. Beautifully written, and surely inspired by a beautiful lady.
Good luck with that, |
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Re: Serenade
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 07:06:55 PM AEST
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Oh my sweet, sweet poet ..
this is exceedingly beautiful
You have rendered my words miscarried .. for how could they possibly capture the stirring
artistry of your undeniable and magnificent talent? My voice seems to slip from my heart
getting caught in the breathlessness of the moment ..
This write is embroidered with an ardor and endless devotion that floods my being with delight,
serenity and so much love, I fear my heart may explode from the sheer power of emotion ~
I am touched beyond the scope of touch ..
Moved beyond movement ..
and left basking in the radiance and tender truth of all your sentiments.
especially that last line
My favourite thus far, sweets ~
~Breezy
[who does not mind that she is stating the painfully obvious! *smiles*]
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Re: Serenade
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 07:55:36 AM AEST
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This one made my heart soar.
*applause*
Just brilliant.
Sheer brilliance. |
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