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A NEW DAY
Contributed by
poewhit
on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 06:00:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Day rises over the land.
Wake I must, time and sand.
Feet running upon the ground.
Birds are hungry, looking profound.
Busy ,early morning traffic view.
Smell the exhaust---- PHeeeeewwwwwww.
What is in the morning news.
War,taxes,vote,point of view,
market,songs of the blue.
Whats going on in the pew.
Over the hill is a new world view.
Crazy world-one sided view.
Copyright ©
poewhit
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2006-09-08 06:00:34]
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by twbanter on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 08:24:43 AM AEST
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I didn't not read this poem, and found it very reflective. It spewed forth negativity, in fine flowing lines. Good write.
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by deadheadpoet on
Thursday, 25th January 2007 @ 08:50:24 PM AEST
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Decided to come check out your page, after reading that great poem you posted today and the kind explanation you PM'ed me with. I see you are a writer very much aware of your surroundings. Some folks walk the streets it would seem oblivious, not you my friend. I'd say your eyes and heart are wide open. I must read more,
.Peace, Laura |
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by willwinuk on
Wednesday, 28th November 2007 @ 08:57:58 AM AEST
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| I like this poem, it's quite a different style. |
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 23rd February 2008 @ 01:30:35 PM AEST
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Good write. The negative vibe it gives off satifies me. (Especially the mention of politics)
:)
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by 3660Days on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:27:15 PM AEST
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| i like the opening lines best |
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by 3660Days on
Sunday, 5th April 2009 @ 07:29:42 PM AEST
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| i like the opening lines best |
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by DoubleS on
Monday, 2nd August 2010 @ 03:20:10 PM AEST
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| Very good keep it up |
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Re: A NEW DAY
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by DoubleS on
Thursday, 18th November 2010 @ 02:17:16 PM AEST
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| Good Job... Keep it up |
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