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Simple yet Sad poem, tell me what you think?
Contributed by
joe89
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Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 01:45:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Tonight is our night Lets dance till we drop Your kisses are my fuel Yet my heart, it says stop.
Am I ill from the madness? My heart should say go For some other reason It begs to say no. But I love you so much This truly cannot be My heart isnt controlling I was born to be free. I push you away To have a quick think Whats wrong with me Your eyes dont blink
I suddenly realize That I dont miss your touch A thing once much loved Now not loved so much...
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2006-09-08 13:45:41] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Simple yet Sad poem, tell me what you think?
(User Rating: 1 ) by StormyNites on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 04:03:42 PM AEST (User
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Its a wonderful poem..maybe sad but I found it more encouraging than that. Like showing the light at the end of a tunnel. Thank you for sharing. |
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