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Walking down depression lane
Contributed by
babylugz
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Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 11:22:37 PM in AEST
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A darkness falls in the middle of the day
As the clouds of depression come racing my way
Everything around me seems so unreal
I am so overwhelmed with emotions that I cant decide how to feel
The madness inside builds up until I scream
I wish the feeling would go away, I wish this was just a dream
I feel I am unable to do anything but cry
Unable to move no matter how hard I try
Then suddenly my tears dry up and turn into rage
As I struggle to escape my body, as if it were in a cage
Angry because I feel like I have become so weak
I remember when I was strong and positive, and now things seem so bleak
I tell myself that I can do this because God would never give me more than I could take
But then I think he must have misjudged me, this time he made a mistake
All my life I have tried to be good
And all I have ever wanted was to be trusted, loved, and understood
Yet how can I expect to be understood when I myself dont understand
But it would help if there was someone wanting to extend a helping hand
Instead I stand here feeling so alone with so much fear
Confused at how I am around people, yet it feels like there is no one here
I try and talk about it but Im embarrassed that I might look insane
So I hold it all inside, I feel I am bursting with pain
Will I ever find my way out of this darkness and rain?
Or will I always find myself drowing as I walk down depression lane?
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Re: Walking down depression lane
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by drtylilsecret on
Friday, 8th September 2006 @ 11:35:06 PM AEST
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Everything is told rather simply, with no mystery, it's good that you're upfront like that. i suppose i liked it cause i could relate more that i'd ever want to, but good write, and good luck finding a different road to go down upon.
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Re: Walking down depression lane
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by Skillz on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 12:15:13 AM AEST
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| I'm here whenever you want to talk.. please message me anytime and i'll give you my messenger name. A very well written poem and so very sad. Did you know that 1 in 4 people suffer from some form or another? Hugggs and my thoughts are with you. |
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Re: Walking down depression lane
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 12:49:47 PM AEST
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Hey, baby,
It's still just as sad as it was in the other place. Still just as reaching. Hope its just not as lingering. And we're lookin' forward to your walk up Uplift Lane. Good work.
wabl
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Re: Walking down depression lane
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by Lilbabe on
Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 09:25:06 PM AEST
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i could really relate to that, as i suffer from depression. nothing ever really makes sense in life, does it? but keep praying and i have a faint hope that maybe things will get better. good write, hang in there.
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