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suggestion box
Contributed by
maz
on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 11:29:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
sarcasticpoetry
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So... when.. you've.. had a bad day,
And you've plenty left to say,
You don't need an excuse,
To come hurl some abuse.
So if you fancy a pop,
Then why not stop off,
And stick a little note,
In my suggestion box.
You've just been dumped,
By the love of your life,
He's been having an affair,
With someone else's wife.
Don't you find it a shame,
That you've no one to blame,
When your severly depressed,
And you're life's mess.
So come along and get it off your chest.
So if you fancy a pop,
Then why not stop off,
And stick a little note,
In my suggestion box.
"You're better off without him,
He was leading you astray,
There's plenty more fish,
At the end of the day!"
Oh I'm awfully sorry,
If it did not occur,
That I was only saying,
What you wanted to hear.
So if you fancy a pop,
Then why not stop off,
And stick a little note,
In my suggestion box.
Copyright ©
maz
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2006-09-09 11:29:23]
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Re: suggestion box
(User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 03:09:54 PM AEST
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I have no clue why somebody rated this a 1 but...i'm assuming you're not one of the people your friends come to for help, huh? nice write, sarcastic, which is always good.
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