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I do (not love you)
Contributed by
Faust
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Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 10:51:47 PM in AEST
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I hope that one day you finally croak.
You say you love me, I want to choke.
I told you the truth and how I did lie
and that caused you to sit and cry,
but be it one tear or equivalent to the sea
your weak sorrow will not change me.
If you were to find me cold and lay me a quilt,
you would fail at inflicting guilt.
I might of once said that I do,
but I never said: I love you.
Copyright ©
Faust
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2006-09-09 22:51:47]
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Re: I do (not love you)
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by ever1der on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 11:12:47 PM AEST
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| I understand this.. well written |
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Re: I do (not love you)
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by devils_denial on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:30:00 AM AEST
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I like this poem very much,
Pretty harsh for whoever is on the recieving end OF such spiteful words...lol
Anyway enjoyed the read.
D.D |
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Re: I do (not love you)
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by The_Unknown on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:39:40 AM AEST
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good write, I liked it. sucks for whoever its for, lol.
good job
-Jessi |
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Re: I do (not love you)
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by midian on
Monday, 2nd October 2006 @ 05:07:27 AM AEST
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very nice although a little harsh for the poor person its aimed at
Wonderful poem |
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Re: I do (not love you)
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th November 2006 @ 06:57:57 PM AEST
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wow ..ouch!
Haha i love it.
I love the honesty.
Hehe Captain of indifference lol.
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Re: I do (not love you)
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by Rakerman1999 on
Friday, 17th November 2006 @ 07:47:02 AM AEST
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The anger in this is sufficating. Like ever1der...I understand too.
Very well done
Larry |
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