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Contributed by
packatack
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Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 01:49:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I wanna be real with you
Everything I have can belong to you
Living life with a woman
Is something I always looked forward to
I see ya every day since the day I met you
And all the things we been thru
Will help us both to go thru
A life of living with the one you love
Like they always say With two, always pulls thru
Conquering every problem and soaring above the skies
Both us can make our dreams become very much alive
Lets keep on our paths and finish what we plan
And reap the benefits of two being in love that lasts
Living the most awesome life being in love
Love never fails love always conquer
Love is the only solution of keeping things together
Brandon
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packatack
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2006-09-10 01:49:37]
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Re: No Title
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by rdv1960 on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 04:36:47 AM AEST
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Hi Bran,
Beautifully written, this one is.
Note: pay some attention that you don't repeat some words too often. "thru" you use three times and together with the "you's"' it's quite a lot of the same sound.
Grtz,
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 10th September 2006 @ 10:44:20 AM AEST
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| lovely, sweet, touching, heartfelt....and all that jazz. I really liked this! |
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